1. Are you confident that your characters' actions and attitudes are clearly conveyed through their reactions to their surroundings?

2. Do your characters interact realistically with one another through a combination of dialogue and action?

3. Would cutting the amount of description and narrative improve the pace of your story?

4. Do you know how their past governs their present behaviour?

5. Do they fight for their principles?

6. Are you using sentence length and emotive vocabulary to vary the pace and style of your story?

7. Are your flashbacks short and effective?

8. Does each scene move smoothly into the next?

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