When you've redone that, try a situation with an external conflict - something that is happening to both characters. Or try a scene with three characters. Try a character talking to himself in the mirror. Remember conflict. Remember to see your scene in your head first.
A final word about conflict - it isn't always something bad happening. Conflict can be something as terrific as winning a million bucks in a lottery or falling in love or discovering your character is going to have a baby. However, conflict always portends change. And dialogue always gives you a window to see into the way that characters feel about that change, or at least the way they want each other to think they feel, which may not be the same thing.
Good luck, good writing, and many happy conflicts to you and your characters.
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