In Exercise #1, you wrote classic "talking heads." (The last thing I mentioned that you were supposed to avoid. Well, I told you it was first draft, right?) So for Exercise #2, you're going to go back, take the exact dialogue you wrote, and fill in. Add setting, speech tags, thoughts, and anything else that will flesh out the scene you saw in your head. I've done this in Example #2 (at the end of this chapter). Read it and compare it to my first dialogue. Then rework your own first exercise in the same fashion.

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