Hypnotic Writing A Case Study

My friend Pete Siegel showed me this copy, which he wanted to use on a web site. Look at it and tell me what you think.

Discover Why The Country's Foremost Success Hypnotherapist Continues to Help So Many Enjoy "Unexplainable" Breakthroughs, and Truly Massive Personal Gains!

For 26 Years, His Claim of "I'll Help You Move from Ordinary to Extraordinary!" Has Been Proven to Help Millions Worldwide Enjoy Amazing Life Transformations; He Guarantees You'll Make Staggering Confidence, Incredible Personal Income, and Peak Life Performance Your Everyday Fact!

You're About to See That His Acclaimed, Mega-Personal Development System Will Work as Thoroughly and Decisively—for You.

Yes—Now You Can Go On to Produce the Simple, Yet Stunning Personal Change That Makes Life Say an Overwhelming Yes—to YOU!

fRead On!)

Hey—are you getting all you can—all you want to, all you believe you should—out of yourself every day, doing targeted things to prosper and purposefully move yourself ahead? If not, why not!

Is your confidence, motivation, focus, and sense of capacity for serious improvement—for success—where it should be, indeed, where you know you truly need it to be, for you to start making megagains in your life? If not, why not!

Are you naturally mentally programmed to exert the quality, irresistible effort that steadily, decisively moves you into greater personal increase, personal triumph—and personal income? If not, why not!

Even though you say you work "hard," try "hard," and/or strive to improve consistently—do you find it seems you're sort of just "going through the motions"—seemingly stuck at levels of "same old, same old"? Or "Okay"? Or even "good"? But not seeing or feeling you're making the kind of progress you want to, sense you should, indeed, deeply know you should? If so, why!

Are you finding that decisively reaching your personal development and financial goals seems to be elusive. That pride laden, joy overflowing, richly substantive success filled life you see others possess still seems to be a far-off case of "Want it, but for some reason aren't getting it" for you? If so, why!

And are you becoming more—notably, decidedly more? Is your life steadily becoming richer and more rewarding because of your daily efforts? Indeed, are you growing, increasing, advancing, and succeeding in multiple areas of your life because of the kind of hopes, dreams, and continual life effort you expend? If not, why not!

Now, stop for a moment, and think here—and really get a sense of just how commanding you and your entire life would be if you had all the preceding aspects set and working the way you really wanted them. Well, you can do more than just think about this now, because:

You'll Now Go Ahead and Fully Take Charge of the Mental Factors to Bottom Line Success In These Areas.

Is This Do-Able? Yes. Is It Do-Able by You—Absolutely!

See If You Want the Following to Start Characterizing Your Life

• Incredible self-confidence?

• Empowering self-esteem?

• Boldness and directness projected outward from feelings of solid self-worth?

• The ability to decide upon an increased income or financial goal—and to then strategize, work toward, and achieve it (fully)?

• Efficient action and peak life performance that produce overwhelming success results and outcomes?

• Full, free, wholly genuine communication impact?

• The affinity to easily, comfortably connect with quality people—and form lasting, positive relationships?

• The ability to ask for something—and get it?

• Feeling in control of your destiny, instead of being at the mercy of other people's thoughts and whims?

• Reflecting the talent and discipline that efficiently follow all the way through with a task, project, or requirement—until it's conclusively, successfully completed?

• Awakening each day calm, positive, and filled with an uplifted spirit—and success expectations about your upcoming day?

• Taking that ability, potential, and capacity for excellence you know you have, and actualizing (bringing it forth) into tangible, empowering, real-life fact?

• Feeling mentally strong, emotionally strong, and filled with the dynamic energy moving you to recognize, seize, and then to convert opportunity into decisive personal gain?

• Feeling a genuine, surging motivation and confidence to start speaking up, acting up, and start doing for yourself what you know you've been leaving up to others?

• Finding your true place in this world—your purpose—and richly living it, and enjoying all the relationships, money, joy, and fulfillment it has connected to it?

• Being forever free of your negative past (and its life compromising tendencies)?

• Releasing, forever, tendencies toward blocking, limiting, and/or sabotaging yourself—and enjoying new, self-tailored affinities that build you up, empower you, and efficiently move you ahead in your life?

• Reflecting the mind-set that regularly takes the initiative to ensure that your vital health, personal advancement, and perfect self-expression continues demonstrably?

• Looking within yourself and finding answers you've heretofore been haplessly looking for (and not finding) outside yourself!

Success—Your Success—Is Never an Accident but the Result of Regularly Applied Strategies, Actions, And an Internal Framework That Fully Overcomes the "Small You"— and Engages Life Vitally as the Maximum You!

Now here's how I rewrote his copy, making it more hypnotic:

Discover Why the Country's Foremost Success Hypnotherapist Continues to Create "Unexplainable" Breakthroughs, and Truly Massive Personal Gains in people just like YOU!

For 26 Years, His Claim of "I'll Help You Move from Ordinary to Extraordinary!"

Has Been Proven to Help Millions Worldwide Enjoy Amazing Life Transformations;

He Guarantees You'll Make Staggering Confidence,

Incredible Personal Income, and Peak Life Performance Your Everyday Fact!

At Last: Gain Iron-Will Self-Confidence—Destroy Your Inner Limits— Develop a Power Mind and quit pussyfooting around with your life and get RESULTS!

Guaranteed by the world's foremost sports hypnotherapist!

Now, at last—Get his three PowerMind worldwide best sellers combined into one brilliant Mega-life transforming system— Read on for details.

Would You Like Any of the Following?

• Incredible self-confidence?

• Empowering self-esteem?

• Boldness and directness projected outward from feelings of solid self-worth?

• The ability to decide upon an increased income or financial goal—and then strategize, work toward, and achieve it (fully)?

• Efficient action and peak life performance that produce overwhelming success results and outcomes?

• Full, free, wholly genuine communication impact?

• The affinity to easily, comfortably connect with quality people—and form lasting, positive relationships?

• The ability to ask for something—and get it?

• Feeling in control of your destiny, instead of being at the mercy of other people's thoughts and whims?

• Reflecting the talent and discipline that efficiently follow all the way through with a task, project, or requirement—until it's conclusively, successfully completed?

• Awakening each day calm, positive, and filled with an uplifted spirit—and success expectations about your upcoming day?

• Taking that ability, potential, and capacity for excellence you know you have, and actualizing (bringing it forth) into tangible, empowering, real-life fact?

• Feeling mentally strong, emotionally strong, and filled with the dynamic energy moving you to recognize, seize, and then to convert opportunity into decisive personal gain?

• Feeling a genuine, surging motivation and confidence to start speaking up, acting up, and doing for yourself what you know you've been leaving up to others?

• Finding your true place in this world—your purpose—and richly living it, and enjoying all the relationships, money, joy, and fulfillment it has connected to it?

• Being forever free of your negative past (and its life compromising tendencies)?

• Releasing, forever, tendencies toward blocking, limiting, and/or sabotaging yourself—and enjoying new, self-tailored affinities that build you up, empower you, and efficiently move you ahead in your life?

• Reflecting the mind-set that regularly takes the initiative to ensure your vital health, personal advancement, and perfect self-expression continues demonstrably?

• Looking within yourself, and finding answers you've, heretofore, been haplessly looking for (and not finding) outside yourself!

Success—Your Success—Is Never an Accident but the Result of Regularly Applied Strategies, Actions, and an Internal Framework That Fully Overcomes the "Small You"— And Engages Life Vitally as the Maximum You!

Write down as many things you notice that make this new copy different and better.

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