Avoid dangling modifiers which do not modify an appropriate noun or pronoun

Unclear: Walking down the street, the beautiful building was admired. Clear: Walking down the street, we admired the beautiful building.

Unclear: After changing a tire, the jack fell on my foot. Clear: After changing the tire, I dropped the jack on my foot.

Unclear: To become student body president, election by students and faculty is necessary.

Clear: To become student body president, a candidate must be elected by students and faculty.

Unclear: At the age of six, Bob's family moved to Long Beach.

Clear: At the age of six, Bob moved with his family to Long Beach.

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