I have composed ihe attached personal statement(s) for submission to
__which 1 hope to attend. If you could take some time to read what I have written and answer the following questions, 1 would be most grateful for the benefit of your perspective.
1. Did my opening paragraph capture your attention?
2. Did you find the statement as a whole to be interesting?
3, Did you find it to be well written?
4. Did it seem positive, upbeat?
5. Did it sound like me?
6. Do you regard it as an honest and forthright presentation of who I am?
7. Did it seem to answer the question(s)?
8. Can you think of anything relevant that I might have inadvertently omitted?
9. Is there material within the statement that seems inappropriate?
10. Did you gain any insight about me from reading this?
11. Did you notice any typos or other errors?
12. Do you think the statement has in any way distinguished me from other applicants?
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